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Mecha-Reign Chapter 001 by ~narutowannabe:iconnarutowannabe:


©2008-2009 ~narutowannabe
:iconnarutowannabe:

Artist's Comments

Well here it is, my 99th deviation. for the world to witness. my sweat and tears and all that shenanigans. all the hype and what nots. it all begins here, and i hope... i hope it gives you enough intrigue to merit want for another chapter.

the story is my own and i've redesigned and re-written aspects of it to make sense.

critiques are welcome, and please cut down the vague:
"lol" "thats cool" comments.

a good critique or a well thought out comment would be nice. i hope you all get to enjoy it.

and if you happen to be some sort of comic book publisher or something... don't mind contacting me on this or other things.

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:iconnarutowannabe:
I LOVED IT NARUTOWANNABE LOL

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:iconclickmon:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! Next time, give me small file sizes for me to work with. It actually tallies up the file size quite a bit and too big to view even on my monitor.

Anyway, YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!! Keep it up!! Don't leave us in suspense! And I want more Grey.
:iconrikyo:
lol thats so cool!!!11:XD:

But man finally get to see some comic work from you!!! I hafta read it more thoroughly tonite, but im likin it so far! Other than the pages being fairly large on the screen, its great work dude. And yea this is why I gotta feature you!
:iconnarutowannabe:
shit i thought so. you shoulda asked, my original size for these images is 4.5"x7"

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:iconclickmon:
You have to be considerate about the monitor resolution size most people have. But anyway, I'm honoured to be the first reader of your epic comic!! MORE NOW PLEASE!!!
:iconnarutowannabe:
well when you do read it give me the final review. hehehe, i'm glad you're likin the feel up to now.

and well, if you want to feature me awesome, then.

i'd feature you in my journals, but i don't do many posts, and nobody would read them much. i dunno.

hehehe glad you like it.

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:iconnarutowannabe:
ha! you know how possible that'll be.

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:iconthejohnsondesign:
okay.

that was hot.

but beyond that, way to apply all the skills you've learned. superb tablet work, and i like the wispy speedlines...

your dialog was great and thick... but a bit wordy at some points. i have the same trouble, because sometimes the picture says a lot more than the text can.

but the build was superb and i'm ready to buy the book now, so if this is teaser for selling that, you've succeded. i'm gonna get back to work, but i definitely wanted to let you know i dig this...
:icondelamir:
Te agradesco por dejarmelo leer como un mes antes. I have to say this is a huge improvement over the previous one. The anatomy, camera angles and diverse character art are exceptional. The dialogue and paneling flow really well. I found it interesting how the natives vocabulary shows through (como espanol culto vs vulgar), and the fact that you're using native americans in a sci-fi story. Overall I really liked the chapter, i was engaged the moment I read the first page, and the pacing is well done. :#1:

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:iconnarutowannabe:
dude, that means quite a freakin' lot from you man.

i hope and can keep up the quality for subsequent issues.

i know what you mean about the dialog. i actually had to add an extra page into the story because it clustered up too much of the art.

thanks much. REALLY.

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